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Originally Posted by Vontech Your poem is pretty good and dark.
But the fouth paragraph didn't make much since to me.
But keep it up. You also spelled some of the words wrong. |
the voices in her head are talking to her (the devil)
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Originally Posted by LostDemon102 Not only did it catch my attention but it impressed me~! ^^
It was dark yet good. It's better than mine! T_T
Hehe~!  Well, keep up the good work~! ^^
Bye~! |
thanks that realy helps.
i doubt that it is better them yours.
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