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Old Jun 15, 2006, 11:48 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: yay

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Originally Posted by The Fighter
Despite all the gramatic errors it was a nice poem!
I didnt understand what this line quite ment after carefully rereading it.


If you could please let me know! !
i think it meant that
she doesnt know how and why she loved a jerk like him...i think...not sure XD question- why is the title- yay?? lol....and it's a sad poem
i like it, but there are some parts that didnt really had a flow, like it was forced and all...but it's a great work ^^ 7/10
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