Quote:
By placing my trust in another,
You came, knowing that I hated,
Hated being alone, having no other.
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^ My favourite quote. It sends the audience an initial insight to the soul purpose of the poem. A neccesity indeed. ^_^
As I've commented in many other poems- This is definitely something the majority can relate to.
Your technique is flawless. The flow and atmosphere of 'Loss', 'hatred' and 'Regret' is maintained all throughout.
I am absolutely addicted to your work. Harsh and cruel, hehe. ^^
Very inspiring.
I eagerly await your next creation.