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Old Aug 22, 2006, 07:04 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Practice.2- End Rhyme (CRITIQUE.comments)

Slave

I'm told I'm worthless
Somewhat I'm left breathless

Used to think I was pure
Now I'm just unsure

Is it what I believe?
Why a beating I recieve?

Here I sit in tears
My cries he hears

On a bed in chains
Sheets covered with stains

Abuse my body get
My face always wet

I tried to stay in the light
But now its leaving my sight




'' the poem so dark but it rimes perfectly i love it''
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