| Re: night creatures
I think it was really creative.
I like how yuu only revealed it was wolves at theend insted of throughing it off at the first sentence...there is room to improve and I liked the words yuu used...clever to ryme it. i don't think it was verry dark as more of an awsome feeling. I really liked it...i would hope yuu write more soon...
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