Thread: ''Reaching for the starts alone''
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Old Oct 22, 2006, 09:25 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: ''Reaching for the starts alone''
other than a couple grammatical mistakes you did a good job on this poem, maybe you should done it in free verse form though.(just a suggestion) Any ways good job and keep up the good work!
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