Kasai

Since the essay workout isnt kicking off, here's a new one!

Write a poem and then sit back for thirty minutes or go do something. Lol. Come back to it and take another look. If you see any mistakes or new ideas pop up, change it. This is what many writers do when they have completed a new work: revise.

Revising a completed piece is a good way to get a better and more interesting piece of work than what you started out with. The only problem is, not everyone can think of new ideas or see mistakes the first time they try this. If this happens? I'd suggest waiting another, or an hour, or even a day to revise.

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So, post your original poem and your revision!

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