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Old Jan 13, 2007, 11:31 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Where I Belong

I really like this poem. I would change Has you ever wished to more?
To Have you ever wished to more?

Also As For I know where my heart belongs.
To For I know where my heart belongs.

Your poem is great and I feel privalaged to read it. Keep up the good work.
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