| Re: More Than Words!
Very nice! a true love longing..
More Than Words! (with exclamation??)
Worth reading.
Although try to avoid repitition of words.
Check the spelling buddy, but not so many..
Maybe it was your keyboard's mistake hehehehe..
use commas so that the reader can breath
and can trully understand your poem..
aside from that, keep up the good job!
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