Wow!!!!! 10/10? Cool!!! Thank You very much equinn!!! And yes, indeed you know who it is about...
And thank You for the comment Loisa!!! And no worries, I'm not asking someone to comment me back when I comment, I just tell what I feel about the poem or story.
I know about the last line, but I did it on purpose, I wrote it differently, haoticaly for people and that guy to understand how messed up I feel
it breakes out of the flow like lines of senceless words, I know, but you can count that out of the poem, you can state that as a note or something.
