"love this poem! Very unlike you though- so sweet, loving and... everlasting...
I like the thing you're trying to say- nothing is everlasting- the rocks will turn to sand, the sun will stop to shine, the trees will die and we... we will die pretty soon, but love will stay after us and it is the thing that is everlasting. ^^ Understood right?
Anyways, a great work Ray! Different from those I've read before. Hope to see something as good as this in future." by lasura
yea lasura is right i love it alot. it had a powerful meaning .it has a good feeling and i love the everlasting feeling.
good job!
hope to see alot more