| Re: New Haiku
From the ones about holidays I liked the first one (maybe even just because the last line, it just made me imagine it all...), the third one (agian because of the last line, it's perfect- "Love in a package"- could you say it better?) and the fourth one (made me dream about love. lol)
And I liked that weird project... I don't think multiple lined haiku exist, I think they're all about being short, the art of haiku is the art to tell many important things in few words, but this was quite interesting. I liked it quite well. |