I wouldn't say screw up, just missing some details I prefer.
Character profile's much better now, although if you still want to improve, I'm not stopping you.
Anon's in. Congratulations!!!
Note: Anyone reading this, please listen. I just found that Ryozanpaku is not an original dojo name since it can be found in an anime (not sure of the name), so I'm deleting the gym name allowing anyone to come up with an original name.
Sorry for not seeing this earlier.