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Originally Posted by Akura13  Awsome!! Totally Love It!!!! This Gets A 5/5!!!!!!  |
Awww..... thank you so much really! I really thank you!
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Originally Posted by Lasura Sorry, I had to say that it need a lill bit work... it's ok, the plot is something just great and I really want to know what happens but the way you wrote it... I find it difficult to read it somehow.... Firstly, I know how hard it is to think up names, but you should give the father a name so I wouldn't think "About who is she talking" whenever I read "he" and so. The second thing is just up to training...
You should continue this story, you become better with each work you write. ^^
I like the funny ones better but this is good too! ^^ |
Oh thank you too for your comment as well an I agree with you! I do need to do better alright so I WILL TRY!!!!!!!!! But thank you!!!!!