| Re: Smiles
Oh my god... this is the most beautiful poem I've ever read... I think... I truly, truly like it... it's wonderful... you've done such a great work here, with describing this ever-smiling girl who was destroyed by this cruel world and all the people who couldn't evalate the value of such a happy person around you.
"A smile will save the world," I heared once, and I truly believed it and I tried to smile whenever I could... until my ex screamed at me something like: "This is not funny!!! Stop smiling like a dork!" that kind of broke me off, so I know how bad it is when people react like this to your optimism... sheesh...
Truly a magnificent poem Seirika, I read it holding my breath and it took my interest 'till the last line and actually... I'd really want for it to go on ^^ A great work!!! Marvelous!!! |