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tsurara · Sep 30, 2007, 05:12 PM

Well... it could use spellcheck, grammar check, paragraph formatting, a plot, and a main character who isn't a Mary Sue...

but otherwise, it is wholly excellent.

Sep 30, 2007, 05:12 PM	#2 (permalink)
tsurara anti-semantics Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Shikoku Posts: 1,312 Thanks: 5 Thanked 81 Times in 55 Posts Credits: 61,124	Re: NARUTO FAN-FIC: The Story Of Sora Hatte Well... it could use spellcheck, grammar check, paragraph formatting, a plot, and a main character who isn't a Mary Sue... but otherwise, it is wholly excellent. __________________ <-RUNAWAYS-> <-lemonsquares? yay!-> <-Mmrs->
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