Thread: NARUTO FAN-FIC: The Story Of Sora Hatte
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Old Oct 01, 2007, 06:18 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: NARUTO FAN-FIC: The Story Of Sora Hatte
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Originally Posted by tsurara View Post
Well... it could use spellcheck, grammar check, paragraph formatting, a plot, and a main character who isn't a Mary Sue...

but otherwise, it is wholly excellent.
Yeah what you said..though the story was great!!!!
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