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LordCastigator · Oct 14, 2007, 07:52 AM

I was guessing I'd have to explain some of the details. Not that unusual. Unfortunately, my body can't keep up with my brain which can spit out ideas faster than rounds out of a minigun! I write down what I can, but some details get skipped trying to keep up.

When I was writing this, I was going for a police report style, as if they had interviewed Castigator over the destruction of Namek 4. Basically, he's telling them all this stuff, but they aren't quite believing him, so they're saying things like "he claims" "appears" & "apparently". Those are his attacks, just going for a different angle.

As for the training with Goku thing, I did read the plot (nice work on it by the way), and I actually referred to the fact they died centuries ago. however one thing that's stuck with Castigator ever since I first created him (over 10 years ago!), perhaps even the reason I've remembered him for so long is that he isn't fixed in one dimension/reality, but moves amongst them doing what he has to where he's needed, sencing what's happening amongst them, and right now he's needed here. True, the Goku & others of this reality died 500 years ago, but the Goku of another reality is still fighting Majin Boo, another is just meeting Vegeta, while another again lost to Freiza, allowing him to rule unhindered. He's helped out in a few of these battles, training with them & learning their moves. Still confuses the cops though

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As for his Dimensional Slasher move, I mainly created that to fill it out a little more, & just in case the very special occasion came up where I was allowed to use it. Basically, he races toward the enemy, only to jump into another reality just before impact. lining himself up, he slips back into this reality just enough to attack,usually from the direction most open, only to return to the other reality, then slip back in slightly for another attack then out again. he speeds the rate of this attack until it seems he's attacking from all directions & their completely open to the finisher. that's when he sticks the sword in the top of their head, sending it down their body, normally says one last comment, then blows them to hell. I've quoted the changed version, so it's easier to find.

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Originally Posted by Daniel219

3 – Dimensional Slasher – ((NOTE: This is a definite, unavoidable kill move, so I don’t plan on using it. I do however like to have it available, just in case the situation allows special permission to do so.)) drawing his sword, he charges towards the enemy, only to disappear meters from impact, in fact jumping into another dimension. After a couple of seconds of confusion, a blur flashes past as he slips back into the original dimension just enough to attack unexpectedly, cutting deep as he does so, then disappears again. He then streaks past again, cutting deep into the victim before disappearing. This continues at a increasing rate until it seems like he’s hitting from all directions at once, at which point he ends the move by slamming the sword into the enemies head & down their body, typically saying one last comment, then destroying their entire existence.

I also hope you don't mind me using your character as part of his history. it doesn't affect yours at all, plus actually adds more details.

If there's any more problems, feel free to tell me & I'll fix it ASAP.