| Re: The Story of The Elements
This reminds me a lot of what I wrote when I was a bit younger, but my work didn't go that well... I understood that writing about all the elements at the same time and how they work together would be too hard, because I wouldn't be able to concentrate on them all- some of the characters would be left out and I didn't want that.
I hope you can manage this.
This story could turn out quite interesting. I'm waiting for the next chapter. I really am- sitting now and bitting my nails... ^^ lol
There's nothing I could say that you sould change. Maybe only you should put some empty spaces where you change from one character, one world- to another, because like this it's harder to overwiev it if you want to just overread it again. Anyways- this is very nice, I envy you ^^ Keep up the good work ^^
I'll give you five stars, because I know how hard it is to write something like this and I really find it amazing, and maybe those stars will help you keep this story on, witch was something I always lacked. ^^ |