bratling

I'm very, highly impressed with this... I felt like you were talking about me which is an interesting feeling to get from someone you've only spoken to a few times. Fantastically felt and I think it's very well written. I hope you write some more, you might find poetry is a good release.

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She's always trying not to cry.
But I can see the demons in her eyes.
She's always trying not to yell.
But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.