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*divine_punishment* · Nov 24, 2007, 01:06 AM

Oh . . . I remember that. I liked the colloqiual narrator . . .

I would have liked to know their names, personal descriptions, something to make us more attached to the characters.

Did he know her from before their first date? If not, it's odd for him to say, "You're always cold." I would be like, "**karate** STALKA, STAY AWAY!"

Nov 24, 2007, 01:06 AM	#2 (permalink)
divine_punishment Shining Star Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Good question . . . where am I? Posts: 1,271 Thanks: 22 Thanked 27 Times in 22 Posts Credits: 59,274	Re: Short Story "Torn too soon" Oh . . . I remember that. I liked the colloqiual narrator . . . I would have liked to know their names, personal descriptions, something to make us more attached to the characters. Did he know her from before their first date? If not, it's odd for him to say, "You're always cold." I would be like, "karate STALKA, STAY AWAY!" __________________ Bite Me!
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