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Originally Posted by ryomakurosaki 
but now those feeling are gone
my piece of heaven now disappears underneath me
I fall through the sky
I reach for your hand
and you turn away...
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TRUE words are written there
Hmmm,
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I liked how it began, and I loved the middle ...But as it got at the end..it sort of became confusing and I couldn't follow [so i read it again] lol.
To tell you the truth it was sort of hard to follow when you dropped down the words.........^-^ But it was sad...made me wanna tear up......
