Dec 13, 2007, 05:26 PM
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Originally Posted by Umbriel  That is really nice. I have read four poems before yours, but left no comments. Yours is really nice. Somehow those words just don't seem quite right. I don't know what it is about your poem that makes me like it so much. Perhaps that is the perfect comment...
I do not know what it is about your poem, but something about your poem stirred something in me. I had to say something to you. To let you know not just that you did a good job with it, but that your words made me feel something. |
Thanks you guys, i'm glad you liked it.
Well the only question i have for you is.. is it a good stirring or a bad stirring? I'm truly glad you liked it Umbriel. Some say that these types of poems come from being with someone, having someone to love and having them love you back... but you know... they don't. They come from your heart and soul. You can be alone and miserable and still make beautiful poems that others enjoy. It's my wish... my dream.. to be in love with someone and be that couple that sticks through everything together, be that couple that everyone looks at and goes "i wish i had a love like theirs." No matter what people say, anyone can have that love and never think you can't.
Anyway....... I'm glad you liked it and hope to hear more from you.
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