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Old Dec 15, 2007, 11:28 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Whats your Naruto character?(made up)

Oh God, another fool dares ask...

I guess I might as well mention this guy again. Just one of oh so many characters I've created...

Name: Goes by the name of Hiroshi Akira. He soesn't want anyone to know his true name of Hiroshi Kamikaze (Generous Devine Wind), last of the Devine Wind Clan, as this much more than likely result in the end of the Devine Wind clan.

Age: 13 during the first series.

Personality: To other members of his basic Ninja classes, he is quiet, keeping to himself. He seems sad most of the time, sometimes daydreaming, yet seems to know all the answers to the basic ninja class questions. Only a few classmates are stupid enough to anger him in a battle, as his anger tends to bring out his violent side, quickly taking out the opponent, only to continue hitting them before the match is called. Never talks about his past, especially before he appeared at the village. Tends to take the lead in a fight, almost as if he wishes to take them on himself.

Appearance: Is never seen without a leather Trenchcoat, which he possibly made himself. Wears black steal capped boots, common black pants & top underneath, plus stores a metal skull mask, complete with built in hood, in his coat which he wears in battle. Never wears any pouches or holsters on his body, instead using pockets in his trenchcoat. Also has a golden ring on his right middle finger which seems to not be removable, an attempt by bullies when he first turned up proving that, as well as painful for them.

Facially, his most identifying marks are the 2 deep red scars on his face, both running from above his eyebrows to level with his nostrils. Though they seem to pass trough his eyes, he has excellent vision in his brown eyes, better than some of the sensei. His brown hair is usually messy, typically about 2-4 inches long.

Village:
-Previous: Came in off the streets 1 year before the start of the series & signed up for basic classes.
-Current: Seems to live just outside the Village Hidden in the Leaves.

Chakra colour: Rarely seen, though it appears to be of a dark blue colour. Refuses medical examinations to determine the origins of this discolouration.

Team mates & relationship:
-Toji (surname unknown) - Sensei - immature, but with some skills. Tends to clash with Hiroshi often. Idolizes Kakashi, even dressing & acting like him.
-Haru Yoshi - 1st team Mate - the reason Hiroshi's stayed there so long. A quiet girl, her first impression of Hiroshi she reveals is a he's a loner & a bully. Has crush on Sasuke.
-Kyoto Gina - 2nd team mate - Haru's best friend. Also a bit quiet. Agrees with Haru about Hiroshi. Also has crush on Sasuke.

Ninja Rank: Passes basic ninja class at same time as Naruto, just in another class. Also attends the same exam as Naruto, but doesn't graduate as his team was forced to leave on a mission before the 3rd part. During the mission, his 2nd teammate, Kyoto, was killed. Remaining 2 team members given special permission to graduate, considering the situation.

Weapon(s): Hiroshi now carries the blades actually used to kill his teammate, Kyoto. These are essentially a pair of blades, extending 15cm below the hand & 7.5 above, with a hole in the middle where the hand goes, the front of the blade also becoming the hand guard. Seem to be made from a stronger than usual unknown metal & apparently was custom made.

He also has a pair of wrist mounted launchers, each shooting a single tethered dart, shaped like a common pen with 2 rows of holes twisting around it's length. Using the assembly, he has been observed blocking high powered blade strikes, while the 200 meter range of the tether means he can swing, hit targets, wrap it around limbs, & many more activities. All of this is done with amazing precision, which is amazing in itself as he normally has the accuracy of a blind man, always releasing the weapon too soon or too early. This also appears to be made from the high strength metal as the blades.

Technique:
His fighting technique seems to be basically just a combination of reflexes, speed, resilience & sheer power, thrown roughly together in a near suicidal manner, which seems to work for him. Though lacking any true technique, he still does well when fighting much more skilled opponents despite first impressions. He occasionally tried to attempt a maneuver only to crash to the ground, though several attempts have been recognized as high level moves, only known to highly advanced ninjas.

He seems to know many techniques that should be beyond his level of skill. As well as using charkra to stick to the top of a door frame to hide before he even signed up for basic classes, he seems to be able to control fire, water, air & earth by making a series of unknown hand seals with either hand, the other not required, then blowing through the loop he makes from his fingers. His control lasts as long as he can blow through the loop, the effects wearing off once he stops, though as long as the loop is intact, he can start again. He has also been seen doing 2 different series of hand signs with each hand, merging them to combine the 2 controlling powers.

Notes:
It is worth noting that he lives alone. He seems to live outside the village gates, the gate guards regularly logging his passing through every morning & night. He earns money by selling leather goods he makes himself, much to the dismay of the local leather worker. Hiroshi's products are higher quality & cheaper than his competitor, causing much jealousy. It even appears he can mend with amazing detail, the many cuts to his trenchcoat being repaired after just a short period of time, without any sign of damage.

Also, the reports of the "Monster in the Forrest" didn't begin until roughly the time he showed up. It is not confirmed whether this, thing, is real or not, though reports have been found from other locations.


Well, that's the basics about Hiroshi. I actually wrote a story about him, but stuffed up how I put it on here, plus I should have fixed some of the details. Sorry if it was a bit long.
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