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Tetsanosuke Kirikami · Dec 17, 2007, 12:31 PM

Well I found some flow in there, but lost it while swimming through it. I suppose it would be more apparent if there was an actual band behind that song, but alas this is the internetz.

Good on the spelling and grammar I believe, so that's good.

It checks out, though it sparked nothing more but a stale and monotonous feeling on the inside that just faded after a few moments.

Still, well written in the sense of above.

Dec 17, 2007, 12:31 PM	#2 (permalink)
Tetsanosuke Kirikami Otaku Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Somewhere in ol'Michigan Posts: 121 Thanks: 15 Thanked 13 Times in 13 Posts	Re: Lyrics, poetic lyrics Well I found some flow in there, but lost it while swimming through it. I suppose it would be more apparent if there was an actual band behind that song, but alas this is the internetz. Good on the spelling and grammar I believe, so that's good. It checks out, though it sparked nothing more but a stale and monotonous feeling on the inside that just faded after a few moments. Still, well written in the sense of above. __________________ "Walk in with Reason, and leave with Passion."
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