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Sorry about splitting chapters but you guys have a 10K word post limit. Here's Ch 3-Part 2-K&K


ADDITIONS TO ORIGINAL CAST

Galvetron Decepticon who is vice president of Cybytron.

Mugghi There are two. One for each LA team. They are genetically enhanced animals that

resemble giant pussycats. Think of Kirara (say Kee-la-la), Sango’s pet on InuYasha.

They are quite capable of piloting the spacecraft and using the onboard computers

and weapons systems. They communicate with the Angels via their earring comlinks

but only the girls can understand them.

Nanmo The Lovely Angels’ computer ‘droid. Each team has one. They can tap into any

computer systems but are NOT capable of piloting the ships. They can also keep in touch with the

Angels via comlink and only the girls can understand them. Think of “R2D2” in “Star Wars”.


The Doctor A time lord from Gallifrey who looks exactly like Tom Baker from Doctor Who.

Leila His companion from Sevateem who looks exactly like Louise Jameson from Doctor Who.

She is tall but not as tall as the Doctor. Her hair is long but not as long as Yuri’s and is

jet-black. Her eyes are deep hazel like Kome’s. She wears a wild woman outfit complete

with knife usually. It is made of leopard skin and is briefer than a TC uniform! No wonder

Keitarou likes traveling with them.

Keitarou Riff Kei and Yuri’s godson encountered by Kei when the girls were 17 years old. They are

now 19 but Keitarou is only 2 years old. Kei rescued the kid from a band of killers (see

DP Flash/Mission 3/Act 1 “Snow White Chaser” for details. A spoiler for a later chapter

if we explain in any more detail now. Gomen!

Beryl Mason A former USC who raised Keitarou and acted like his Grandma to him. Gooley, Garner,

Poporo and Gustav are or were his Uncles and Kei and Yuri are or were his Aunties.

Ella Hathaway USC of Unit 12. Another Auntie and mother of Ann Hathaway.

Ann Hathaway Daughter of Ella and TC partner/supervisor of Keitarou who is or will be a TC also.

She has or will be injured in 2268 and spends most of the ff in hospital but Kei likes to be

thorough so we included her.

CC We know we already included this one earlier but we forgot another one of its

characteristics. CC is quite conceited and loves to argue with everyone at the 3WA HQ

but most especially with USC Poporo because he gets so annoyed with it. Well, without

further ado here is Chapter 3 “Laying Down the Law to the Lovely Angels”:

You will no doubt remember that at the end of the last chapter Marlene Angel had demanded an

explanation from her three superiors NOW. “Well, OK Ms. Angel. The quarry you are being sent

after is called “Black Ghost”. He seeks to dominate a mid-sized world named Cybytron. Because of

your and Miss Sawaguchi’s accomplishments on old Terra, gomen, Earth, the leaders of Cybytron

have requested you two specifically from the 3WA to apprehend this criminal and prevent him from

carrying out his evil scheme. Therefore---” began Garner. “Cut to the chase Commander!” growled

Kei who had been unusually quiet for more than five minutes. “You can’t send both MY trainee and this

airhead’s dolt anywhere together! They aren’t anywhere near to being ready to fly solo yet! And Kami

Shimatta! Nai! Not even CC would dare to send out both of our teams together!” exploded an enraged Kei.

“I won’t do it!” “You’re mean Chief! We can’t work with them! whined Yuri. BAM!! “I’ll teach you to

call ME that you Fxxxing half-witted jackass!” A very pissed off Kome Sawaguchi landed a haymaker right

to a certain redhead’s jaw as their three superiors, Yuri and Marlene watched in amazement. Nobody

got away with belting Kei O’Halloran not even Yuri Donovan could do that and get away with it! “And

besides Miss O’Halloran you’re right. We cannot possibly work with you and that blonde screwball

anyway!” muttered Kome. “Why of all the nerve! Listen up you pink-headed freak! I seem to be the only

one of us shi that has any sense whatsoever!” screamed Marlene smashing a gloved fist down on the

table in front of Kome. “The CC picked us. you and I, Kome, because we were requested by a client. It’s

only natural for CC to also opt to pair us up with our current supervisors Miss O and Miss D. After all in

3WA lore the “Lovely Angels” are legendary having a perfect success record. We both joined the 3WA

to sharpen our skills and learn how to keep the peace, didn’t we? And every TC swears allegiance to UG, the 3WA and their superiors, right? And since CC is part of the 3WA, don’t we owe CC our allegiance as well?

We’re all acting like spoiled brats! Don’t you know that we all have to do things we don’t want to do? That’s just part of growing up. So let’s forget our grudges and do what we’re told to do. OK, hazu?”

Marlene again crashed a gloved fist down on the table in front of Kome. “And the last time I checked,

ladies, I was still your superior so shut your mouths and do your jobs! Understand?” ordered a usually

timid and subdued TSC. “Now, I’m afraid that I have some more unpleasant news for all of you so onegai

behave yourselves. CC has decided that you need supervision on this mission. So USC Poporo and USC

Gustav will accompany you. No arguments! Oh, onegai, Yuri! Stop whining! Lovely Angel 2 is being readied

for your use. Since ten of you are going-O’Halloran, Donovan, Angel, Sawaguchi, Poporo, Gustav along with Mugghis 1 and 2 and Nanmos 1 and 2-it makes sense to use the larger ship. The new sonic disruptor

beam ion cannon is now being installed on it as well. It is to be used with utmost discretion and only in a

real emergency. Got that?” Garner paused and looked at everyone but especially at Yuri and Kei. The latter TC nodded her head and the former complained. “Oh, Commander! You said Kome and me were going to

have first dibs on that! Kei always gets the new toys and we never get anything!” Yuri began to pout.

“For Christ’s sake Yuri, grow up! The sonic cannon is not a toy! And you’re 19 years old so stop acting

like a baby!” yelled Garner, fuming. “Alright Kome and Marlene. Go to the armory and draw whatever supplies and weapons that you think you’ll need for the mission.” Anton Gustav came to his superior’s

rescue. A suddenly humbled Kome and a stunned Marlene saluted him and hastened to comply. As their

two trainers hurried after them a stentorian roar froze them dead in their tracks. “Not so fast you two! Get

back in here!” bellowed Donald Poporo. “Stand to attention! Now Tro-Cons or have you forgotten that you

are supposed to be 3WA trouble consultants, ladies? You’re supposed to set an example for your trainees to follow. So there will be no more arguing, whining, crying, pouting, sulking, questioning of orders or any

insubordination of any kind whatsoever from hereon in. Is that clear?” Both girls looked at their feet and

nodded. “Aren’t you ashamed of yourselves? Just think, on Terra they are getting ready to celebrate the

Birth of Jesus Christ, Christmas. It is a time filled with love, giving, peace and tolerance of one’s fellowman.

Perhaps if you two tried to emulate these things you wouldn’t get into so much hot water. Kei, this morning Marlene went out of her way to be nice to you by including you in her Christmas shopping trip to the mall.

Oro did you do? You practically demolished the place single-handedly. And if you say ‘It’s not my fault!’ I’ll

deck your ass myself!” Yuri grinned and did the shame on you thing with her fingers. “And Yuri!” Poporo

turned to the other walking disaster. “Me sir?” asked Yuri, fluttering her Bambi aoishi aizu at him demurely.

“Hai, you! You took Kome to the “Moon Over Mayhem” club on Battle Moon 5, didn’t you?” inquired

Poporo. “Yes sir, but--” answered Yuri. “Hai, I know: ‘It’s not your fault!’ right? But you forgot to mention to her that it’s the roughest bar in this sector, didn’t you? Nai, you took her there just so you could use her

to get a brawl started. Then she could beat up Ella Hathaway for you, right? Why? Because sine Ella was a

USC you couldn’t hit her yourself without being put on probation or suspension. But you figured that Kome being a newcomer would not know that Ella was a boss and might get away with belting her. So

you dragged Kome over there and sicced her on Ella Hathaway, didn’t you?” demanded Poporo

angrily. “I only wanted Kome to hit her sir. I didn’t intend for Kome to dislocate her shoulder and break

her arm sir.” sobbed Yuri. “If we didn’t need you both on this shimatta mission I’d have you both on

suspension for six months! But you shi will work together. USC Gustav and I will be in charge. You will

carry out all orders without question. Is that clearly understood?” Both tro-cons nodded. “Now go to the

armory and draw the gear you need. After that report to Kei’s ship. You will receive further briefing in flight.

Any questions? Nai? Then dismissed!” A shocked Kei and Yuri saluted him and exited the room.



Chapter 4 “Strange Visitors at the Higurashi Mall” coming soon. Please R & R. Arigato for your interest in

our work. Ja Mata for now! -Keiman and Kei.
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