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Old Jan 15, 2008, 09:14 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Air Gear Fanfic Chapter 1: Crimson Angel

**This is my first attempt at writing something that is based from an anime series or from any other form of copyrighted material. I hope you enjoy it! ^_^ More chapters to come soon! They will be posted in reply to this thread's comments, in order to save space in the 'Fanfic' category. So you will have to look past replies to get to following chapters. **

Kyo Nakamura was just an ordinary teenager trying to live an ordinary life. He had always gone to school, worked part-time, and lived a pretty ‘typical’ teenager lifestyle. Hanging out with friends, shopping for new games, meeting new girls… Yet, he always felt so empty; like there was something in life that he was missing.

“Did you ever feel like there’s a big hole in your life?” Kyo asked his classmate, Kazu, during their lunch break one day. “Hmm? I don’t understand what you’re sayin’, man,” Said Kazu. They both picked up their books and started heading back to class. Kyo looked at Kazu and said, “I mean that I don’t feel all that alive, lately. Like something is missing and I don’t know what.” Kazu couldn’t help but bust out in to a fit of laughter, “Ha, ha, ha!! Maybe you need to get laid, Kyo-kun!” Kyo, with a serious look on his face, stopped dead in his tracks. “I’m bein’ serious, man!! It’s been bothering me for the last couple of months now. It’s driving me up the friggin’ wall!” Kazu patted Kyo on the back, “My bad, dude. I’m just yankin’ your chain. You’ll figure it out, I’m sure.” “Yeah,” Kyo said in reply. And with that, they headed back to class.

Kyo’s desk was a window seat. He never had any qualms about sitting near the window—who would? He had a perfect view of the city and he enjoyed every minute of it. While staring out the window, daydreaming during classes, he seen something highly unusual; something he had only seen on television. Jumping from building to building, rooftop to rooftop, was this stunning beauty in red. Her long, black hair flowing as if it was playing with the wind while she danced in mid-air, riding on what looked like, “AT’s?” Kyo said aloud. He stared as if he had never seen the world through a pane of glass before. The girl in red was simply stunning. Each movement was graceful and swift. Each twist and turn was poetry in motion. Kyo’s eyes could not move away from this crimson angel. “NAKAMURA!! PAY ATTENTION!!” Screamed the teacher, as he pelted Kyo in the face with a piece of chalk.

A couple of hours later, school ends and Kyo packs his things to head home. Kazu, catches up to him to walk with him home. “Hey, Kyo, did you hear about the new transfer student?” Never one to put himself in the gossip loop, Kyo says, “Nope. Didn’t know we had one. Why?” Excited, Kazu exclaims, “Well, I hear she’s pretty hot! On top of that, rumor has it that she came here to street race or something like that. Racing chicks are hot! Don’tcha think?” “Yeah, sure,” Kyo replies in his usual ‘I don’t care’ manner. They decide to take a shortcut through an alley and turn left. Halfway in to the alley, Kazu noticed a strange noise, almost like gears winding at an unusual speed. “You hear that?” Kazu asked. “Hear what? I don’t—“ Before Kyo could finish his sentence, five men pop out of the shadows. Each wearing, “AT’s!!” Said Kazu, “You’re wearing AT’s!! How cool is that?”

“How ‘bout I show you how cool this is?” Said one of the five AT wearing thugs as he uppercuts Kazu; sending him flying back about a yard or two. “What was that for??” Kyo says as he runs to help Kazu. Suddenly, he’s cut off by another thug who says, “We’re the Devas and you’re on our turf! You gotta pay to go any further, be it forward or back.” Kyo was getting angry, at this point. He hated guys like these ones, so it seemed fit for him to start swinging his fists. Each blow was dodged, due to the speed the thugs had from the use of their AT’s. Kyo was starting to wear out quickly.

“What the hell is goin’ on? What should I do?” were the only thoughts running through Kyo’s mind. One of the thugs happened to see an opening and struck Kyo hard, sending him straight to his knees. “Well, fellas. Should we make an example out of him?” All the other thugs were laughing and agreeing. “Then let’s whoop his ass!” As soon as those words came out the Deva’s mouth, he was hit by a red blur and fell to the ground. As Kyo looked up, his chin hit the dirt in amazement. Standing in front of him was the dazzling beauty he had seen out of his classroom window—the AT riding angel in red!

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