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Originally Posted by atomik_sprout  This poem would be so much better if it was written without so many elipses. Y'know these "...."? Otherwise, it wasn't half bad. It's just the structure that I have a problem with. (happy?)  |
well
i posted it on myspace first
and i just took it from there right to here
the ... are to shot whee it goes from line to line ya know...
like the
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yea
it was for my gf