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Originally Posted by atomik_sprout  Ellipses aren't meant for line breaks. That's what the enter/return key is for. Ellipses are meant for pauses. That's why I said it throws off the entire structure of the poem. It's like a person who speaks with long pauses due to breathing problems or obesity. |
Well, when you
are reading from
line to line doesn't
your mind pause
for a moment because
your eye has to move
to the next
line to continue reading?
So its the same thing isn't it?