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Old Mar 11, 2008, 08:54 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: It's no big deal,really. Break my heart. Let me down. Make me Cry.

I really liked this poem. Although it didn't flow as nicely as I wished it would have I really got the overall feeling through it anyways.
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She's always trying not to cry.
But I can see the demons in her eyes.
She's always trying not to yell.
But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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