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Originally Posted by FallenSpiral  I'm sorry, I didn't want to make it seem like it was fighting. I just tend to like to show a different view on things; ha-ha! As one of my other profiles somewhere on the internet... "I'm the guy that's always smiling." |
well i found ur view to be a very god point
and yes you are right
u do have to pause to go from line to line
there for inserting a pause in a poem where the line breaks do not happen is the right thing to do