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Old Mar 16, 2008, 07:47 PM   #3 (permalink)
SakinaFlutePlayer
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Re: Light in the night

...Oh sorry, I'll work on that.... When I say "the houses are sleeping" I'me using reading devise that my teacher taught me, um... I forgot the name... but it gives any nonliving object a trait of a human, I think...

I only have alittle bit that I have added on so, yeah. Just like a few sentences, I'll edit it though when I get farther,promise!
Chapter 2: A new…friend?!

Hakuryu slept with difficulty and was continuously bothered by police sirens, and ambulances that were even louder. Hakuryu rolled in his sleep and his head banged into a pole that the police had set up to keep people away from the street while they investigate. They had seen Hakuryu, but since he was just a boy, and also a Shadow master, they had left him alone. “OW!”, Hakuryu shot up and rubbed his now, hurting head. “Why is there a freaking a pole here! There wasn’t one last night!”, He shouted to no one in particular
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