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Old Apr 05, 2008, 09:22 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Oh, dear Mister Fridge.

wow.........I have to say that in all my life reading poetry...this is probably the most humorous poem I have ever read...and the fact that it is so true...makes it even more unique and stand out from the rest....
the rhythm could have been a little bit better and the transitions from one couplet to another were a little bit rough in my opinion..
but over all...this is an excellent poem.
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