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Old Apr 08, 2008, 12:31 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Zombie story

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Part3
I Ran up to Daryl and he pointed his gun at me. I jumped out of the way and he blew the head off of a monster that snuck up behind me. I ran into the house as the monster people started to come into the yard. I grabbed a couch and pushed it against the door. My brother and Reeves ran up stairs and came down carrying a very heavy looking chess. I told my brother to come with me as Daryl and Daracus asked Reeves some questions.
We went up stairs and into my room. I looked out of the window and saw that at lest twelve monsters were outside. I went in my closet and pulled out a briefcase and a few gym bags. He asked me, “What are in here, bricks?” I told him to shut up until we went down stairs. As we descended a felt a chill run down my spine. On instinct I turned a round just as a monster lunged at me. I pushed my brother down the stairs as I struggled with the monster. I told him to open the briefcase. I saw him open it out the corner of my eye. He pulled out two of my most prized possessions, my two pearl-handed .350 Magnums.
I managed to throw the monster off of me and my brother shot one of the monsters legs off. Kevin then ran up the stairs and shot it in the face. Unbelievably, nobody knew what was going until they herd the shot. Daryl and Daracus grabbed the corpse and threw it out a near by window.
Kevin went down stairs to put the bags from my room into the living room as I searched for where the monster got in. the search was a grim one when I found out that the monster got in threw one of the basement’s windows.
A monster was stuck in the window because it was too fat to get in. I shot it in the head and put a wet blanket over the thing to keep it from smelling up my house. After strategically placing a few blocks of wood and metal, I was sure that nothing else could get back in so, I went back up stairs.
As I exited the basement I heard something inside of the closet. I cautiously walked towards the closet when something cracked me on the side of the head. Almost feinting, I lost my balance but managed to turn around. I saw that it was a young woman. She had blood on her face and a deep cut on her arm. She swung her weapon at me again but I caught here arm and twisted her arm until she screamed and dropped her weapon. My brother ran up the stairs and pointed the gun at the woman. I told not to do it and to get his wife. I restrained her long enough for Kevin to come back with his brothers and wife. Kevin took over my restraining of the lady and I went to the bathroom to clean off.

Part4
AS I walked to the bathroom I remembered the noise I heard in the hallway closet. I slowly approached the closet door knowing that just about any thing could be inside. I heard a scrapping sound as I reached for the door knob. I swung open the door and I was face to face with a seven-foot monster. I screamed as the monster lunged at me. I fell backwards on to my back and rolled to the side to avoid the monster.
The thing stumbled into the hallway after me breaking the door off one of its hinges as it ran forward. I managed to dodge his arm as he tried to grab me. In the light I could see that one of his arms was missing and there was a huge hole blown out of his chest. The hole was big enough for me to stick my head inside of it yet was still small compared to the sheer bulk of the monster. I quickly ran into my bed room as the monster turned towards me again. The monster smashed into my dresser demolishing it as he continued to chase after me. I jumped out of the door and onto the patio. The thing walked out of the house after me and stood in front of the only way back in. The monster charged at me but this time I was expecting it to. I duck at the last possible second causing the monster to slam into the railing. I grabbed the monsters legs, he was surprisingly light, and tossed him over the side of the balcony. The monster landed on top of two other monsters with a bone crunching thud. The monster I threw got up and walked over to the buildings wall and stared up at me. Me and the monster looked at each other for a few seconds until I heard a noise behind me. I swung around and saw that in the door way was a little boy. The boy stared at me for a few seconds before he fainted. I walked over to the little boy and I heard him whisper, “Daddy’s coming.” I looked around and saw that nobody but me and him were in the room. I shrugged and picked him up. I carried him downstairs to where everybody was located. As I entered the room I told them to look at what I found. My brother jumped up and told me to put him on the couch. After being satisfied with the work my daughter was doing (wiping blood off the boy) I asked Kevin if they knew anything about that woman. Kevin scratched his chin,” Well she told us that she would not talk to anybody but you.” Kevin got up to leave but then stopped and turned back to me,” She did tell us that her name is Sara.”

Part 5
AS I entered the room I tried to remember where I heard the name Sara before. As I contemplated the answer I walked towards the kitchen. The heavenly smell of steak entered my nose. My mouth overflowed in anticipation of the steak. As I entered the kitchen I saw that my daughter had indeed cooked a steak but she had already given it to the women named Sara. As I watched Sara eat I went into the refrigerator and saw that all of the steaks were gone. I remembered that I had one hidden and I checked my hiding spot. I let out a cry of astonishment when I saw that it was gone. I had been saving the steak in tenderizer for about a week so it would almost melt when I ate it. I had not eaten it because I wanted to show my daughter that I had enough self control to not eat it. Today was going to be the last night that I had to let the steak stay in there. I turned around and slammed the door shut. I ran out of the door and stared at my daughter. “That that was my steak”, I yelled. Amanda glared at me, “It did not have your name on it.” I pointed at the steak and replied,” yes it does. I had it branded on there.” She looked at the steak and saw that it had indeed been branded with my name. “Whoops. My bad,” she said as she left the dining room. “You have no remorse do you!”, I grabbed an orange off the counter and threw it out the door. I heard her cry out in pain as the orange hit her. “That’s what you get!”, I turned around and Sara had stared at me. I stuck my tongue out at her and turned to go back into the kitchen. “Wait I…” Sara stood up and knocked over her drink. I turned when I heard her voice. All of my memories of her came rushing to me as I looked at her. I smiled at her “Sara Mossoro, is that you?” I saw that her eyes seemed to sparkle, when I said her name. She nodded and motioned for me to come closer. I stared at her as I heard footsteps behind me. I turned around and saw that it was my brother. “Uh… We may have a problem.”

Part6
I turned around and followed my brother into the living room. The foot steps behind me let me know that Sara had followed me. My brother led us over to my trunk. Before I got there I ran straight into a wall of smells. It was not a bunch of horrible smells, but a collection of nice smells. As I smelled in this heavenly aroma I noticed Annie unconscious on the floor. As soon as I saw her on the floor I knew what the problem was. I told everyone to get out of the room. They attempted to argue but I managed to get them to leave.




Okay thats all I have so far please help me get free from my mind blockedness!!!
If this is a ZOMBIE story why do you refer to them as monsters? cant you just say zombie? or is this one of those things where the ppl dont know what is trying to eat their entrails?
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