| Re: "In The End"
Well, the only question remains is that how could a 9 - 14 year old rape? o-O Unless he was like a superhuman being with uber strength powers, most women would slap him or something before he could do anything. Especially a 9 year old.
And you do realize that it's the 'final' place in the 'whole' universe, those floating lands? People are losing faith in existence, and just live out their days generally dull and boring, as if there isn't any point left? Or at least, in Heavens Fall. Just thought I'd make sure, that the idea that this is the last place in the universe was clear.
And well, does his faith grant him anything more? Like Slayne's does?
Other than that, I hate the character, but I can't say that it wouldn't be acceptable with a few things clear. But I doubt a 19 year old in this age would have the means or potential to be as 'powerful' as he seems to be. He's younger, meaning he hasn't been around as long. Just thought I'd bring that to your attention too.
Oh, one more thing (says uncle), 'Zatoichi' is a blind swordsman who as uber awesome.I don't think they made a sword after him, or maybe I'm mistaken. < Shrug. >
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