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Old Apr 18, 2008, 07:26 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: A Love For A Soldier...
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Originally Posted by P.R. Princess View Post
W.O.W.
is all i have to say. you got the emotions perfectly...
just wow. the flow was great and i didn't see any problems in grammer. (of course i suck at writting XD) anywho...
i love this. i clicked and umm yea lets just say a tear or two fell.
very good. keep up the good work.
I completely agree! Your an awesome poet and I think you did a really great job on this and you poured your heart into this poem though you have some minor grammer errors like "alittle" should be "a little", that can easily be fixed! The best poem I've seen so far! Congrats!
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