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Old Apr 28, 2008, 11:41 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: A kiss

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Originally Posted by PhoenixSara View Post

A kiss it was all that was to him: -(,)
Yet i heard the angels sing. -(,)
The stars fell down from the sky,
We couldn't forget; my heart and I -(.)
ummm.... just saying but the fromat has some problems... at the end of each "sentece" it should be a "," and not anything else... (but at end a "." is needed) but its good anyways.... (little short...)
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