May 02, 2008, 06:21 AM
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| Fallen Angel
Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: I am in between Heaven's Gate and Hell.
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| Re: Unrequited (unrequittal revised)
i like this line, it gives you a haunted kind or feeling that makes you want to scream and very sweet coming from a guy. Quote:
Why can't I be good enough for you?
The simple truth, deafening it haunts.
I love you more then a man can do
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