| Re: Forsaken
Thanks for your comments. ^^
@PhoenixSara: *taps shoulder*, I created this poem because I was having a "persona struggle".
@Corvus: Thanks for your honesty too. I am open to suggestions too. ^^.
@Soldat of life: Honestly speaking, I had difficulty in ending the poem... I wanted to have the reader imagine the life of the girl as Hades took her to his lair. I watched "Lilium" too and I was left in awe (I was experiencing goosebumps too).
__________________  Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^ |