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Old May 08, 2008, 02:45 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Re: Broken
I really like that poem, it touchs me. Love the first two lines
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upon a building's roof i stand
his final letter in my hand
I like it

it had that sad superhero feel to it.

other then a few grammar and punctuation, it was really good
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