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Old May 15, 2008, 12:55 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Vampire high

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Originally Posted by wolfgurl724 View Post
I don't know how good i am going to be at this so i will just post something short at first


A young girl with jet black hair and lime green eyes sat underneath the old willow tree. A sketchbook was placed open in her lap. A slight breeze blew and her jet black hair blew with it. Rika closed her eyes and rested her head against the old willow tree which sat on the grounds of Vampire High. No one ever really talked to Rika. Rika thought maybe it was the way she dressed or that they knew she was a vampire. Rika started to doze off and her sketchbook remained open in her lap.

well tell me what you think and i just might post more ^_^
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Misty
needs more detail like her face was she chubby,did she have high cheekbones and more setting detail
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