well i liked it,the poem has a good flow in it,and theres one thing that i dont like about this,it's color,LOL,you should have made it red,o well,great job,
Quote:
I look into your eye's
I see your beautiful soul
I look at your warming smile
I feel a flutter with in my heart
I feel your touch
And I get this glow
I know there's a man within
I can see him flow
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liked it..^_^