Quote:
well i liked it,the poem has a good flow in it,and theres one thing that i dont like about this,it's color,LOL,you should have made it red,o well,great job,
I look into your eye's
I see your beautiful soul
I look at your warming smile
I feel a flutter with in my heart
I feel your touch
And I get this glow
I know there's a man within
I can see him flow
liked it..^_^
|
Thank you so much....I have never had anyone ever be postive about my poems mostly insults.
Quote:
|
whoa, ur so talented. man, im jealous. it was really awesome. i like your poems, 'cause their short and sweet.
|
Thank you too...I am glad people actually like me poems...I made a new one to day I plan on posting it on here tomorrow...I left it at school oops...lol.