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Old May 24, 2008, 06:15 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Cold Rain..Angel Chased Away My Pain...

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Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
So many times i've been hurt, It's a wonder how I still have a heart
But then I felt your's beat along with mine, We're we ment to meet?
Could this be what they call destiny, Is this the so called " fate " ?
I think so but do you, Do you believe in any of these?...


"Could you believe if it were for me? "


When I hear your voice, I can bearly contain myself
When i'm sad and down, You always make me smile and never frown
You always know what to say to make me laugh, And to never cry
If i'm ever lonely all I gotta do is think of you, And I can't help to softly smile...
wow.. you know I couldn't of said it better myself... but you forgot giggling like a school girl..lol It's very well written and you can feel how you really feel about this person. The emotion from this one says it all. Also to add the element of fate playing a roll was nicely done. I think everyone thinks of that when they look at love and wonders 'if' they didn't... etc.. great good keep it up angel.. they seem to be getting better and better.
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