Jul 03, 2009, 03:31 PM
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| Re: Winding Road
>.< where's my cookies? *checking the jar* >.< don't tell me you took it old friend >.<
No wonder you give it at ease o.o T.T my cookies!!
Great poem as always.. enjoyed this work of yours.. thank you for writing it...  It might bring me inspiration for my new poem! Still a work in progress though >.<
Oh back the poem.. Love the way it flowed.. ^^ but i kinda feel like.. the first two part... kinda... confusing me a bit.. you see.. you stated there that there's a soul lying down.. then you continue after that.. you're taking winding road... and that you're wondering in circles... I don't get it.. when one have fallen and lay down feeling numb ect ect.. ain they suppose to stay down? :1p:
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