i love the story is hilarious and very cute...can't wait to hear more from you..good job!! :thumb:
i love the story is hilarious and very cute...can't wait to hear more from you..good job!! :thumb:
if u want the next chapter here it is. i have them because i DID help write it
Tianka (sarcastically): Great plan
Paris: Don’t start with me Tia
Mally: I want to quit
Mally: I don’t feel right doing this
Maggi: Whatever you have to help
Mally: I don’t have to if I don’t want to
Paris: Right because you’re KICKED OUT! : mad:
Aly: GO KARA!
Michelle: GO GO GO!!!!!
Announcer: Kara Roberts from Fairfax is in the lead!
Sasuke: Why are all these people shouting?
Aly: For their favorite swimmer
Isabel: To encourage them so they go faster
Announcer: Kara Roberts is 1st, Pamela Barnes 2nd, and
Joan Clayton 3rd
Selene: Kara you’re like a fish in water
Aly: No wonder you got 1st place
Kara: Thanks guys but it wasn’t as easy as it looked
Michelle: Victory celebration, ice cream
Selene: Come on Kara you deserve it
Kara: Thanks but who’s paying?
Michelle: I’ll pay
Aly: Finally, you do all the eating
Michelle: I’ll pretend like I didn’t hear that
Steven: It wasn’t that good
Selene: Oh please you’re just jealous that Kara won.
*they all leave except Steven*
Paris: Hey how’d you like to ruin Kara’s life or even destroy
Steven: I wish that was possible
Maggi: It could be possible
Tianka: We’ll tell you
Salma: If you join us
Steven: I’ll join
Kara: I forgot I left something at the pool
Selene: Uh, Kara why is the pool black?
Kara: It wasn’t like this when I left
Aly: *throws rock*
Kara: It didn’t do that either
*water monster appears*
Michelle: Did it do that?
Selene: Just picked it up ;)
Aly: I think we know who did this
Paris: You’re dumber than you think
Sasuke: Oh just shut up
Steven: You won’t be giggling for long*presses button*
Selene: *screams**gets thrown in water*
Sasuke: Selene! *dives in*
Kara: Don’t mess with my friends Pillow Boy*throws
Maggi: That’s the best you could do HA!
Aly: Don’t wanna mess up your face*slings mud*
Maggi: *gets hit* You are so gonna pay for that
Isabel: Oh really? *karate kick*
Salma: Don’t mess with me toothpick!
Michelle: Who you calling toothpick you gigantic tub of fat
Paris: Whatever, the cyclone will handle them. CYCLONES
Aly: We can’t fight this thing alone
Kara: We’ll buy Sasuke and Selene some time
Isabel: Got it distraction
Selene (thinking): This is it I’m going away
Sasuke: *grabs Selene *
*rises up to surface*
Sasuke: *does CPR*
Selene: *cough water comes out*
Sasuke: Are you ok?
Selene: Yeah, you saved my life twice. I wish I could do
something for you
Sasuke: I’ll think of something, but now we need to help your friends
Sasuke & Selene: FIRE JUTSU!
Kara: Teach us that after we dry off
Selene: No problem
I felt so weird I'm in love with people that aren't even real. I mean come on Elliott, Mark? Well Sasuke since the sleepover, but why would he like me I'm fat, ugly, I hardly have any hair. Why would anyone like me, I'm a monster. Everyone in my class hates me. I started to cry when I saw a shadow bigger than my own. It was Sasuke, I said” go away leave me alone." He sat down next to me and uncovered my face. I kept trying to hide myself. I didn't want him to see me cry, but he found my face and lifted it. He stared into my eyes but I kept mine closed. He found my tears and wiped them.
She was crying but I didn't know why, so I asked her"What's wrong?” she didn't answer. She just kept crying. I held her very close to me and put my arms around her, even though my shirt got wet from her tears. I never know why girls are such emotional creatures.She seemed really broken up. She finally said"Why are you acting like this? “I just said "Because you are pretty cool, emotional but cool “She cried harder. I knew I screwed it up even more. The only thing left was asking her to the date. This would be the only time we'll be out of public.
Sasuke:Why are you like this?
Sasuke:You're not afraid to put it out there
Selene:People aren't what they seem
Sasuke:People misunderstand me sometimes too
Selene:You're pretty sweet if people get to know you
Sasuke: Don't tell anyone that
Selene:*light laugh*I won't*kisses forehead*
Sasuke:I...uh...was wondering if
Michelle: If you can help me!
Aly:She's stuck tighter than an elephant in a mouse house
Kara:*pops Miriam out*Go pack for Seaside school tomorrow
Isabel: And Valentines Day, the entire 5th grade is going
Selene:OMG! I totally forgot!
Aly:Our ride leaves at 9:00
Sasuke:[Great Job Sasuke]
Michelle: Look there it is!
Selene:Michelle you've said that like 7 times now
Michelle: Sorry I'm excited*squeals*
Sasuke:Enough already, my ears are gonna pop
Michelle:Selene can we switch seats, I don't want 2 sit with the pain in my neck
Sasuke:Whatever, wait what!
Selene:No problem Michelle,•whispers•Try to ignore Miriam's snoring
Aly:I've got the solution for that. MICHELLE WAKE UP!
Michelle:Yes Mother! What happened?
Isabel:It’s been like a million hours
Andrew: You've been whining the entire ride
Alexander:Exept when you were sleeping
Deigo:You looked like a dead bird
Isabel:Got your Ipods
Selene:Gavin DeGraw,Fergie,Hilary DuffJohnny Cash,Black Eyed Peas,Akon,The Pussycat Dolls, All-American Rejects, Good Charlotte,Shakira,The Fray,Cascada,Gwen Stafani,and Beyonce
Aly:O.O you...Johnny Cash...God's Gonna Cut you down
Sasuke:Yes, why is that so hard to believe
Kara: You...a Genin
Selene:It's no problem just don't scream, here *hands Sasuke an Earphone*
Andrew:Selene's got a boyfriend!
Aly:You should worry about yourself before my pencil is in your eye
Kara: Don’t make me strangle you
Selene: I'll save you the trouble *strangles Andrew*
Andrew: I'll shut up now
Kara: Are we there yet?
Kara: Wish we’re there already. I sometimes get carsick
Emanuel: You got to be kidding me!
Kara: Not kidding
Isabel: Hey! We’re entering Virginia Beach!
*everybody rushes to the windows*
Bus Driver: We’re here at the hotel! *goes outside to unload bags*
Kara:HEY! EVERYBODY SHUT UP!
*everybody shuts up and turns to Kara*
Kara:Tonight there will be a Test of Courage, 12:00, no teachers, and at the seashore. Spread the word so everybody in 5th grade knows. ‘Kay?
Aly: You handle that well
Selene: Come on lets get our bags
Kara:Sasuke, you stay with the boys. You’ll share a room with them
Sasuke: Sure, who do I follow?
Isabel: Andrew, Alexander, Mehdi, and Emanuel
*Sasuke goes to them*
Selene: Think he’ll be alright?
Kara: I reserved a room for all 5 of us with a seaside view. Lets go
Aly:How does she do it? *shaking her head*
Selene: Maybe we’ll never know
Michelle:Kara's already looking for our bags. Lets go help
Kara: Found my bag and laptop.
Selene: Found my bag too.
The rest of them: Same here
Michelle: Let’s go
They enter the lobby and signed in. They go upstairs and start unpacking. Their mouths, except Kara’s, dropped open. Four-poster beds and velvet carpets and their own bathroom.
Aly:How’d you reserved a room like this?
Kara:Special offer. Got it before Emanuel and the enemy could get it
*somebody knocks on the door**Selene opens it*
Emanuel: We have the rest of the day as free time on the beach
Selene:Cool. Now get out so we can change
Selene’s bathing suit is a two-piece red bikini, Isabel’s a one-piece green one, Aly’s a two-piece black one, Michelle’s a green one-piece, and Kara’s a two-piece silver one that looks like a one-piece.
Selene:Let’s go. We have all our stuff
Isabel:Yeah, let’s go
*they walked to the beach where everybody is*
Emanuel: Nice to see you in a swimsuit, Kristine!
Mehdi:Yeah, what’cha doing?
Sasuke:It's like there are a million Naruto's
*Kara grabs Emanuel and Mehdi by the hair and drags them to the seashore and throws them 10 feet out in the water. Everybody stares, mouths open, and are silent. *
Isabel: Why’d you that?
Kara: They’ve been bothering me for some time
*Emanuel and Mehdi staggered out of the water, dripping wet and with seaweed hanging from their arms. Everybody starts laughing. *
Selene: Who thinks they can beat Kristine at swimming?
All Boys: ME!
Kara: Yeah, right
Assel: Okay, ready, set go!
*They dive in and start swimming.Kristine’s in the lead and was until the finish line. *
Kara: Beat ya!
They spend the afternoon playing. After everybody took a little nap and got ready for the Test of Courage.
Michelle: Ready? Time to draw the pairs
Aly:Kristine and Emanuel
Kara:What?! I object!
Selene:All’s fair in love and war
Aly:Isabel and Mehdi, Aly with Andrew, Michelle with Rolando, and Selene with Sasuke. Any questions?
Andrew:YAY! THANK YOU MY LOVE ALY!
Andrew:I'll be quiet
Michelle: First group, Kara and Emanuel, have to walk for half a mile along the shoreline and find a buried locket.Isabel and Mehdi have to search Room 132 for a locket. Andrew and Aly have to go into the woods and search for a mask with a red ribbon.Rolando and I have to find a perfect rose in the garden.Selene and Sasuke have to walk up the hill and visit a shrine and get a bag of incense. There’ll be a full moon tonight, so nobody gets a flashlight. Be back before 2. Go!
Kara(in the lead): Hurry up!
Isabel:Found it yet?
Isabel:You’d better hurry. Deadline’s almost here
Aly: Found the mask yet?
Andrew: No. You could at least help
Aly:I’m keeping lookout
Rolando:Owwww! I got pricked by a thorn
Michelle:Live with it
Rolando:I don’t think I can
Selene:Are we there yet?
Selene:I see the shrine!
*they get to the shrine and get the bag of incense*
Aly:Got your stuff yet?
Selene:Then let’s go down together
*they walk to the hotel and enter the lobby*
Kara:You guys already here?
Isabel:Then everybody’s here
Selene:Give the girls your pair’s stuff and lets go to bed
*guys handover the things*
Kara:Tomorrow’s Valentine’s Day. So if you have and valentines put them outside our door
*they walked upstairs to their suite and change into pajamas. Everybody goes to sleep except Selene and Kara*
Selene:Why aren’t you asleep, Kara?
Kara:I always stay up late. Wanna go for a swim?
Selene:At this hour!?
Kara:Yeah.I can swim anytime
Selene:Sure, why not.Let’s change
*they change and go to the pool*
Kara:I’m going to get something to drink.Want one?
Selene(startled): What’re you doing here?
Sasuke:Couldn’t sleep, so I took a walk
Selene:Oh yeah, what were you going to tell me on the hill?
Sasuke: Oh. That I li…
Kara: I’m back with the drinks!Oh Sasuke, you’re here.Good thing I picked up 3
Selene:Yeah. Lets finish the drinks and go to bed
*they drink the drinks and go to bed*
Michelle(grumbles): Why are you already awake, Isabel?
Isabel:To get the valentines. There’s one for Kristine from Emanuel and one for Aly from Andrew. Oh, wait there’s a valentine for Selene that’s from a secret admirer
Aly:Like she said, it’s from a secret admirer
All thinking except Selene: She was excepting one from Sasuke
Kara:Pack up! It’s time to go home
*on the bus ride home*
Emanuel: Did you get my valentine?
Kara:Yeah and if you send me another one, I’ll hurt you
Michelle:We still have 3 more hours to go before we get home
I love it!!!!!!!!!! It's a bit funny and it's just awesome to read!!!!!! It got me so excited!!!!!! Plus I SEE MY NAME IN THERE!!!!!! I feel famous! I just can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! :D:
You should check the names, I'm sure you've put Kristine in place of Kara for a few times... ^^ Still I like reading this... it's really entertaining... for now... how many more chapters are there? ^^
A nice work you've done here... very fun!!! ^^