LOL I love this story!! It's so funny! I hope you make a sequal to it!!
Chapter 1 Sasuke, HERE!?????
Aly:So what do we do now?
Selene:We've got some really cool things in my attic
Kara:Irene get our Nitendogs
Isabel:Why do I always have to get it?
Selene:Now where'd she put the box
Sasuke:Where am I?
Sasuke:Yes, do I know you?
Selene:No but we know you
Selene:Guys you will not believe this!
Michelle:I don't believe it!!!!!!!!
Isabel:How on Earth did you get here
Kara:It's not like you chose randomly, did you?
Sasuke:I don't even know how I got here
Aly:Guys we need to talk, Sasuke stay here*drags girls to closet*
Selene:What are we going to do
Michelle:Make him our boyfriend?
Isabel:He's from the Naruto world isn't he?
Selene:We can't let him see the show or it'll make some kind of rim in the time space continum
Kara:Even I don't know what you said
Selene:What I'm trying to say is that it'll make a big effect
Michelle:You could've just said that
Aly:We need to keep an eye him
Kara:But we're always in school
Isabel:He can be my cousin, that way we can keep an eye on him.
Selene:Irene you're a GENIOUS!
Kara:First it's WAY too cold for you to be wearing shorts
Selene:Second you'll be going to our school as Irene's "cousin"
Aly:Wear these*hands him jeans*
Michelle:You'll need to blend in
Isabel:So no more of the spikes
Selene:*takes sasuke's headband off*
Sasuke:How am I going to get back?
Kara:We need to still figure that out
Michelle:You'll sleep in Selene's bed
Selene:Hey I'm not happy either
Kara:Next thing you know we'll all be ninjas
Sasuke in the middle
Sasuke: Everything looks invisible
Selene: It's winter
Rolando:Hey Simul who's that?
Selene:Well good morning to you too,did Luke and Ruth come yet?
Rolando:No not yet
Selene:Oh yeah Rolando Sasuke Sasuke Rolando
Sasuke:Anyway, why are you wearing that
Luke:She's a captain patrol
Selene:Luinent but thanks. This is Luke and Ruth
Selene:COME ON GUYS IN LINE!
Sasuke: Do you have to shout
Selene: Deal with it pretty boy
Sasuke:Ha ha not funny
~In School's Main Office~
Isabel: He's my cousin, Sasuke
Kara:So he'll be staying a while
Woman:And who's he going to stay with
Aly: All of us
Woman:Ok*give sasuke sticker*
*all come out*
Selene: Which class is he going to Mr.V,Mrs.K,Mrs.Sherril, or Mrs.Smith
Sasuke: This is the girls at the academy all over again
Aly: Don't get over your head
Isabel:Gotta go we're going to be late
Selene:Ninjaboy move it
Selene I said deal with it
Selene:What did you say?
Selene:Yeah, come on we gotta go
Selene:How do you like it so far?
Selene:Well don't worry after lunch we get recess
Sasuke:Finally a break
Selene: Get over it Ninja boy
Sasuke:1 good part
Selene(under her breath):emo
Kara:Math Test=Giant Pressure
Aly:That is our second problem
Selne:How are we going to get prince charming back?
Michelle:We need another sleepover
Isabel:We need to go to you attic
~Konohagakure Ninja Academy~
Chapter 3 The War is ON! Φ
Paris: I’ve got an Idea that'll destroy Simul and her "friends" forever!
Tianka: Cousin are you sure, I mean it does feel good beating them up except Kristine she's too tough. The boys are even afraid of her
Maggi: Tia we can get rid of those bugs
Salma: It’s perfect! Plus you've got the money
Steven: Hi Girls
Kristine: STEVEN GET OUT OF HERE!
Selene: Why do we even come here?
Michelle: Speaking of that anyone wanna join me?
Isabel: Remember we’re checking out the warehouse
Kara: Bring all your gear
Selene:We’re going to have a little party
Sasuke:???, I don't understand girls
Sasuke: No thanks
Selene: If you say so *leaves*
Sasuke:You have to help me, I think I like your friend
Aly:Like or Like like
Sasuke:The second one
Kara: No way!
Sasuke:Keep it down, how do I show her I like her?
Isabel: Know her better, ask questions?
Michelle: Figure out what she likes
Kara: And Sakura?
Kara: She knows that Sakura really likes you, and Ino
Sasuke:really Sakrua Haruno likes me
Kara: That’s what I said, and Ino
Sasuke(sarcastically):Oh what a big surprise, I already know
Isabel: That’ll save us time
Aly:Speaking of time, we gotta go to the warehouse now
Michelle:*yells for Selene*
So they're all going to the warehouse but they don't know that P.T.M.S(Paris,Tianka,Maggi,Salma)set a trap so when they go in the stairs,railing,and wall will shoot. So the only place safe is the floor. It’s made like a maze
Selene:Let's have some fun*steps in*
Sasuke:watch out*tackles Selene*
Selene:Thanks You saved me
Sasuke(top of Selene) :No Problem
*Selene and Sasuke's Eyes Meet*
Assel: Did you check the floor plan before you rented this place?
Kara: Yes, it didn't have these
Isabel: These must've been recent installments
Michelle:Uh Selene Sasuke we could use you help
Selene:Kara throw the bead
Kara: No WAY!
Ay: Sage!*grabs and throws bead*
Kristine: HEY! That cost 70$
Aly: You can buy another one
Sasuke:*looks at Wall*It's built like a maze
Paris: So you figured it
Tianka: By the way you should look where you step
Maggi: And where you hold
Salma: You should listen
Michelle: What’s that supposed to mean?
Selene:*doges all*I've seen you do low things, but this Low, trying to kill
Maggi:So what you'll be gone
Salma:We'll finally have peace
Sasuke: Don't get too Confident*smirk*
Paris: Stay Out Spiky
Kara: You should watch where you're going
Aly:Yeah you'd go bananas
Isabel: Let’s get out
Maggie: What do we do now Paris*slips*
Paris:They won't get away, the war has just begun
~Konohagakure Ninja Academy~
Yes, I would love to be friends! And those two parts were soooo AWSOME!!! Can't wait for the rest!! And also, I made a story if ya wanna check it out!
LOL!!!!! I love these funny stories!!!! ^^ They're just so cool and I really, really enjoy reading them, this was great, even though I don't fancy Naruto and Sasuke much ^^ The only problem I had was with understanding who exactly is speaking... I'm bad at remembering names. lol But don't worry, this spoiled even Shakespear sometimes...
This one is just soooo cool and so fun... all that I try to make like this come out sad anyways.... lol
I'm really looking forward for the next chapters and other stories by you!!! ^^
Last edited by Lasura; Jul 05, 2007 at 03:21 PM.
My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
so u used my bg as ur sig huh?anyway u should have at least changed the Irene in the first chapter to Isabel. Come on! If Irene ever sees this she would definetly make sure ur life became miserable