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    Re: The Adventures of K.A.S.I.M

    i love the story is hilarious and very cute...can't wait to hear more from you..good job!!

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    if u want the next chapter here it is. i have them because i DID help write it

    Chapter 4

    Tianka (sarcastically): Great plan

    Paris: Don’t start with me Tia

    Mally: I want to quit

    Salma: WHAT!

    Mally: I don’t feel right doing this

    Maggi: Whatever you have to help

    Mally: I don’t have to if I don’t want to

    Paris: Right because you’re KICKED OUT! : mad:

    Mally: *leaves*


    ~Pool~

    Aly: GO KARA!

    Michelle: GO GO GO!!!!!

    Isabel: WOO-HOO!

    Selene: KARA!!!!

    Announcer: Kara Roberts from Fairfax is in the lead!

    Sasuke: Why are all these people shouting?

    Aly: For their favorite swimmer

    Isabel: To encourage them so they go faster

    Announcer: Kara Roberts is 1st, Pamela Barnes 2nd, and
    Joan Clayton 3rd


    Selene: Kara you’re like a fish in water

    Aly: No wonder you got 1st place

    Kara: Thanks guys but it wasn’t as easy as it looked

    Michelle: Victory celebration, ice cream

    Selene: Come on Kara you deserve it

    Kara: Thanks but who’s paying?

    Michelle: I’ll pay

    Aly: Finally, you do all the eating

    Michelle: I’ll pretend like I didn’t hear that

    Steven: It wasn’t that good

    Selene: Oh please you’re just jealous that Kara won.

    *they all leave except Steven*

    Paris: Hey how’d you like to ruin Kara’s life or even destroy
    her

    Steven: I wish that was possible

    Maggi: It could be possible

    Steven: How?

    Tianka: We’ll tell you

    Salma: If you join us

    Steven: I’ll join

    ~Outside~

    Kara: I forgot I left something at the pool

    ~Pool~

    Selene: Uh, Kara why is the pool black?

    Kara: It wasn’t like this when I left

    Aly: *throws rock*

    *dissolves*

    Kara: It didn’t do that either

    *water monster appears*

    Michelle: Did it do that?

    Selene: Just picked it up

    Sasuke:

    Aly: I think we know who did this

    All: PARIS

    Paris: You’re dumber than you think

    Sasuke: Oh just shut up

    Selene: *giggles*

    Steven: You won’t be giggling for long*presses button*

    Selene: *screams**gets thrown in water*

    Sasuke: Selene! *dives in*

    Kara: Don’t mess with my friends Pillow Boy*throws
    harpoon*


    Maggi: That’s the best you could do HA!

    Aly: Don’t wanna mess up your face*slings mud*

    Maggi: *gets hit* You are so gonna pay for that

    Isabel: Oh really? *karate kick*

    Salma: Don’t mess with me toothpick!

    Michelle: Who you calling toothpick you gigantic tub of fat

    Paris: Whatever, the cyclone will handle them. CYCLONES
    DESTROY THEM!

    *all leave*

    Aly: We can’t fight this thing alone

    Kara: We’ll buy Sasuke and Selene some time

    Isabel: Got it distraction

    *Underwater*

    Selene (thinking): This is it I’m going away

    Sasuke: *grabs Selene *

    *rises up to surface*

    Sasuke: *does CPR*

    Selene: *cough water comes out*

    Sasuke: Are you ok?

    Selene: Yeah, you saved my life twice. I wish I could do
    something for you


    Sasuke: I’ll think of something, but now we need to help your friends

    Sasuke & Selene: FIRE JUTSU!

    *monster destroyed*


    Kara: Teach us that after we dry off

    Selene: No problem
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    Re: The Adventures of K.A.S.I.M

    Chapter 5

    ~Selene's View~
    I felt so weird I'm in love with people that aren't even real. I mean come on Elliott, Mark? Well Sasuke since the sleepover, but why would he like me I'm fat, ugly, I hardly have any hair. Why would anyone like me, I'm a monster. Everyone in my class hates me. I started to cry when I saw a shadow bigger than my own. It was Sasuke, I said” go away leave me alone." He sat down next to me and uncovered my face. I kept trying to hide myself. I didn't want him to see me cry, but he found my face and lifted it. He stared into my eyes but I kept mine closed. He found my tears and wiped them.
    ~Sasuke View~
    She was crying but I didn't know why, so I asked her"What's wrong?” she didn't answer. She just kept crying. I held her very close to me and put my arms around her, even though my shirt got wet from her tears. I never know why girls are such emotional creatures.She seemed really broken up. She finally said"Why are you acting like this? “I just said "Because you are pretty cool, emotional but cool “She cried harder. I knew I screwed it up even more. The only thing left was asking her to the date. This would be the only time we'll be out of public.
    Sasuke:Why are you like this?
    Selene:...
    Sasuke:You're not afraid to put it out there
    Selene:People aren't what they seem
    Sasuke:People misunderstand me sometimes too
    Selene:You're pretty sweet if people get to know you
    Sasuke: Don't tell anyone that
    Selene:*light laugh*I won't*kisses forehead*
    Sasuke:I...uh...was wondering if
    Selene:If what?
    Michelle: If you can help me!
    Aly:She's stuck tighter than an elephant in a mouse house
    Kara:*pops Miriam out*Go pack for Seaside school tomorrow
    Isabel: And Valentines Day, the entire 5th grade is going
    Selene:OMG! I totally forgot!
    Aly:Our ride leaves at 9:00
    *all leave*
    Sasuke:[Great Job Sasuke]
    ~Virginia Beach~
    Michelle: Look there it is!
    Sasuke:We heard
    Selene:Michelle you've said that like 7 times now
    Michelle: Sorry I'm excited*squeals*
    Sasuke:Enough already, my ears are gonna pop
    Michelle:Selene can we switch seats, I don't want 2 sit with the pain in my neck
    Sasuke:Whatever, wait what!
    Selene:No problem Michelle,•whispers•Try to ignore Miriam's snoring
    Michelle:*snoring*
    Aly:I've got the solution for that. MICHELLE WAKE UP!
    Michelle:Yes Mother! What happened?
    Isabel:It’s been like a million hours
    Kara:11 hrs
    Andrew: You've been whining the entire ride
    Alexander:Exept when you were sleeping
    Deigo:You looked like a dead bird
    Kara:*glares*
    Deigo,Alexander,Andrew:Oh S.hit!
    Selene:Thank you
    Isabel:Got your Ipods
    Aly Selene:Yes
    Selene:Gavin DeGraw,Fergie,Hilary DuffJohnny Cash,Black Eyed Peas,Akon,The Pussycat Dolls, All-American Rejects, Good Charlotte,Shakira,The Fray,Cascada,Gwen Stafani,and Beyonce
    Aly:You win
    Sasuke:Uh...
    Aly:O.O you...Johnny Cash...God's Gonna Cut you down
    Sasuke:Yes, why is that so hard to believe
    Kara: You...a Genin
    Sasuke:And?
    Selene:It's no problem just don't scream, here *hands Sasuke an Earphone*
    Andrew:Selene's got a boyfriend!
    Aly:You should worry about yourself before my pencil is in your eye
    Andrew: Bye!*snickers*
    Kara: Don’t make me strangle you
    Selene: I'll save you the trouble *strangles Andrew*
    Andrew: I'll shut up now
    ~Konohagakure Ninja Academy~

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    Re: The Adventures of K.A.S.I.M

    Chapter 6

    Kara: Are we there yet?
    Selene: No
    Kara: Wish we’re there already. I sometimes get carsick
    All:WHAT!
    Emanuel: You got to be kidding me!
    Kara: Not kidding
    Isabel: Hey! We’re entering Virginia Beach!
    *everybody rushes to the windows*
    Kara: Finally!
    Bus Driver: We’re here at the hotel! *goes outside to unload bags*
    Kara:HEY! EVERYBODY SHUT UP!
    *everybody shuts up and turns to Kara*
    Kara:Tonight there will be a Test of Courage, 12:00, no teachers, and at the seashore. Spread the word so everybody in 5th grade knows. ‘Kay?
    All: YES!
    Kara: Good
    Aly: You handle that well
    Kara: Thanks
    Selene: Come on lets get our bags
    Kara:Sasuke, you stay with the boys. You’ll share a room with them
    Sasuke: Sure, who do I follow?
    Isabel: Andrew, Alexander, Mehdi, and Emanuel
    *Sasuke goes to them*
    Selene: Think he’ll be alright?
    All:Yeah
    Kara: I reserved a room for all 5 of us with a seaside view. Lets go
    *Kara leaves*
    Aly:How does she do it? *shaking her head*
    Selene: Maybe we’ll never know
    *all leave*
    Michelle:Kara's already looking for our bags. Lets go help
    Kara: Found my bag and laptop.
    Selene: Found my bag too.
    The rest of them: Same here
    Michelle: Let’s go
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    They enter the lobby and signed in. They go upstairs and start unpacking. Their mouths, except Kara’s, dropped open. Four-poster beds and velvet carpets and their own bathroom.
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    Aly:How’d you reserved a room like this?
    Isabel:Yeah, how?
    Kara:Special offer. Got it before Emanuel and the enemy could get it
    *somebody knocks on the door**Selene opens it*
    Emanuel: We have the rest of the day as free time on the beach
    Selene:Cool. Now get out so we can change
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    Selene’s bathing suit is a two-piece red bikini, Isabel’s a one-piece green one, Aly’s a two-piece black one, Michelle’s a green one-piece, and Kara’s a two-piece silver one that looks like a one-piece.
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    Selene:Let’s go. We have all our stuff
    Isabel:Yeah, let’s go
    *they walked to the beach where everybody is*
    Sasuke:O. O
    Emanuel: Nice to see you in a swimsuit, Kristine!
    Mehdi:Yeah, what’cha doing?
    Sasuke:It's like there are a million Naruto's
    Kara:That’s it!
    *Kara grabs Emanuel and Mehdi by the hair and drags them to the seashore and throws them 10 feet out in the water. Everybody stares, mouths open, and are silent. *
    Kara:That’s done
    Selene:Thank You
    Isabel: Why’d you that?
    Kara: They’ve been bothering me for some time
    *Emanuel and Mehdi staggered out of the water, dripping wet and with seaweed hanging from their arms. Everybody starts laughing. *
    Selene: Who thinks they can beat Kristine at swimming?
    All Boys: ME!
    Kara: Yeah, right
    Assel: Okay, ready, set go!
    *They dive in and start swimming.Kristine’s in the lead and was until the finish line. *
    Kara: Beat ya!
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    They spend the afternoon playing. After everybody took a little nap and got ready for the Test of Courage.
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    ~12:00(midnight)~
    Michelle: Ready? Time to draw the pairs
    Aly:Kristine and Emanuel
    Kara:What?! I object!
    Selene:All’s fair in love and war
    Kristine: Fine
    Aly:Isabel and Mehdi, Aly with Andrew, Michelle with Rolando, and Selene with Sasuke. Any questions?
    Isabel:I’m fine
    Andrew:YAY! THANK YOU MY LOVE ALY!
    Selene:*chokes Andrew*
    Andrew:I'll be quiet
    Michelle: First group, Kara and Emanuel, have to walk for half a mile along the shoreline and find a buried locket.Isabel and Mehdi have to search Room 132 for a locket. Andrew and Aly have to go into the woods and search for a mask with a red ribbon.Rolando and I have to find a perfect rose in the garden.Selene and Sasuke have to walk up the hill and visit a shrine and get a bag of incense. There’ll be a full moon tonight, so nobody gets a flashlight. Be back before 2. Go!
    ~Kara’s pair~
    Kara(in the lead): Hurry up!
    Emanuel: Coming!
    ~Isabel’s pair~
    Isabel:Found it yet?
    Mehdi:No
    Isabel:You’d better hurry. Deadline’s almost here
    ~Aly’s pair~
    Aly: Found the mask yet?
    Andrew: No. You could at least help
    Aly:I’m keeping lookout
    ~Michelle’s pair~
    Rolando:Owwww! I got pricked by a thorn
    Michelle:Live with it
    Rolando:I don’t think I can
    ~Selene’s pair~
    Selene:Are we there yet?
    Sasuke: Halfway
    Selene:I see the shrine!
    *they get to the shrine and get the bag of incense*
    Sasuke:I…uhm...li...ke
    Aly:Like swimming?
    Andrew:Hi guys
    Selene:Hi
    Aly:Got your stuff yet?
    Sasuke:Have it
    Selene:Then let’s go down together
    *they walk to the hotel and enter the lobby*
    Kara:You guys already here?
    Andrew:Yep
    Isabel:Then everybody’s here
    Selene:Give the girls your pair’s stuff and lets go to bed
    Isabel:Sure
    *guys handover the things*
    Kara:Tomorrow’s Valentine’s Day. So if you have and valentines put them outside our door
    *they walked upstairs to their suite and change into pajamas. Everybody goes to sleep except Selene and Kara*
    Selene:Why aren’t you asleep, Kara?
    Kara:I always stay up late. Wanna go for a swim?
    Selene:At this hour!?
    Kara:Yeah.I can swim anytime
    Selene:Sure, why not.Let’s change
    *they change and go to the pool*
    Kara:I’m going to get something to drink.Want one?
    Selene:Sure
    *Kara leaves*
    Selene:*just relaxing*
    Sasuke:Hey
    Selene(startled): What’re you doing here?
    Sasuke:Couldn’t sleep, so I took a walk
    Selene:Oh yeah, what were you going to tell me on the hill?
    Sasuke: Oh. That I li…
    Kara: I’m back with the drinks!Oh Sasuke, you’re here.Good thing I picked up 3
    Selene:Yeah. Lets finish the drinks and go to bed
    Sasuke:Yeah
    *they drink the drinks and go to bed*
    ~Valentine’s Day~
    Michelle(grumbles): Why are you already awake, Isabel?
    Isabel:To get the valentines. There’s one for Kristine from Emanuel and one for Aly from Andrew. Oh, wait there’s a valentine for Selene that’s from a secret admirer
    Selene:WHO!?
    Aly:Like she said, it’s from a secret admirer
    Selene:Oh
    All thinking except Selene: She was excepting one from Sasuke
    Kara:Pack up! It’s time to go home
    *on the bus ride home*
    Emanuel: Did you get my valentine?
    Kara:Yeah and if you send me another one, I’ll hurt you
    Michelle:We still have 3 more hours to go before we get home
    All:*groan*
    ~Konohagakure Ninja Academy~

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    Re: The Adventures of K.A.S.I.M

    I love it!!!!!!!!!! It's a bit funny and it's just awesome to read!!!!!! It got me so excited!!!!!! Plus I SEE MY NAME IN THERE!!!!!! I feel famous! I just can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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    Re: The Adventures of K.A.S.I.M

    You should check the names, I'm sure you've put Kristine in place of Kara for a few times... ^^ Still I like reading this... it's really entertaining... for now... how many more chapters are there? ^^

    A nice work you've done here... very fun!!! ^^

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    Re: The Adventures of K.A.S.I.M

    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    I love it!!!!!!!!!! It's a bit funny and it's just awesome to read!!!!!! It got me so excited!!!!!! Plus I SEE MY NAME IN THERE!!!!!! I feel famous! I just can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
    what's your name??is that 50 characters yet???????
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    Re: The Adventures of K.A.S.I.M

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    You should check the names, I'm sure you've put Kristine in place of Kara for a few times... ^^ Still I like reading this... it's really entertaining... for now... how many more chapters are there? ^^

    A nice work you've done here... very fun!!! ^^
    yeah i saw that too..............................*annoyed*
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