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Old Jun 12, 2009, 09:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Angel's Blooming (Continuation)

*Year Later*

I’m fifteen now and I’ve finally accomplished my life goal, to come to Japan. I roamed Kansai’s streets with hopes to find a job and an affordable apartment. After four non-English speaking restaurants and a grocery store I decided to try my luck with a small quant card shop a few miles from the airport. Its sign read: Yoshiro Card Shop in English with Japanese symbols above in a larger print. The inside was enchanting although the store seemed more of a desert than a city store, “Hello, are you open?”

“Hi, my name is Hiroshi Yoshiro, how a may I help you,” a fetching young man stated as he entered from a back room.

“I’m looking for a job.”

“I’ll get you an application,” the boy ran into a back room and quickly returned with the papers.

I took it, “Thanks,” I looked the application over, “I can’t really read this. Do you have an English version?”

“No.”

“Oh well, thanks anyways,” I handed the application back to Hiroshi.

“Hold up, it seems you need this job bad so I’ll help you out.”

“Thank you,” I said shyly.

“No problem, today the store isn’t too busy, anyways.”

After eleven minutes of work a red haired boy burst into the room, “Hiroshi,” he greeted!
“What,” Hiroshi shouted back?

“Who’s the girl,” the boy asked calmly?

“Lorraine Clems, she’s applying for a job,” Hiroshi explained, “and do you have to be so loud,” Hiroshi also spoke plainly now.

“Yeah, I do. Nice to meet you, Lorraine, and don’t worry I’m sure you’ll get the job. By the way my name’s Hiroki.”

“Hi,” I said with a slight smirk.

“What’s your address,” Hiroshi continued.

“I don’t have one.”

“What do you mean,” Hiroshi asked?

“I mean…since I just got here a couple of days ago I haven’t had time to learn it.”

“Oh so she’s staying with family,” Hiroki tried to make sense out of it all.

“Right,” I lied.

“Have you hand any work experience,” Hiroshi referred to back to the application?

“No, but I’m good with people and I love to help others.”

“Alright, do…never mind. How old are you?”

“Fifteen.”

i'll try to write more if i get a chance. hope you guys enjoy it.
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Re: Angel's Blooming (Continuation)

Nice work. Very down to Earth. I know this isn't really cool, but would you consider reading and reviewing my fic? I need some constuctive criticism.
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