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    Chapter2 Little Riku and Momo

    Chapter 2
    He turns the dorr knob not knowing what was going to happen next.
    "Hello again...Itachi..."Momo said getting up from her bed making her way towards him.
    "Hi...Momo..."Itachi said nevously,"You said to come?"
    Momo walks over to him. She stares at him for a little bit, and then she hugs him. Itachi pats her on her head and he leaned in close to her.
    He whispered in her ear"Where have you been my whole life...my little momo?" He smiles and she smiles back.
    "I've been right here," she said pointing to his heart. He picks her up and kisses her. He kicks the door closed.
    "I love you Momo" Itachi said smiling he kissed Momo again.
    Momo smiles back"And I love you Itachi.."
    She touches his face gently and french kisses him.Momo-metal head, and hates getting up early. Loves to party and hangout with her friends and day dreams of Itachi...her forbidden lover for live.
    "I cant believe it!" thought Momo, " Itachi- the coolest guy in night school...here with me! This is seriousl is the greatest dream ever!"
    Momo amiles and stares at Itachi. Both of them not having to say a word because they know what the other is thinking.
    "So..." Itachi said after a short brief of silence. "Look at how much you have grown. Amazing..."
    Itachi staring at her tracing every detail of her. From her head all the way down to her ninja slaying boots (lol dont ask). Then something cauht his eye.




    sorry folks thats all i can write for now my sis wants me off the comp ill post more later on like tomorrow....maybe love you all
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    Last edited by rikus demonic lover; Apr 08, 2008 at 09:52 AM. Reason: wanted to type more of the story!
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    Re: Chapter2 Little Riku and Momo

    ...........................gosh darnit momo.

    lol, i must say could use a bit of tightening up. that and i had kinda hoped for there to be more XD
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    Re: Chapter2 Little Riku and Momo

    Hmmm but Chapter one is no where to bee seen? Now where are you chapter one?



    Yeah try to keep them in the same post so that way people dont have to search! I got yelled at for that, so I am just trying to warn you. when I find chapter one I will read this one. ok but it looks great keep it up!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Chapter2 Little Riku and Momo

    Thanks for the advice I was goona bring the link here and for all the other chapters I just never finished writinf chapter 2 on here yet so I never really got the chance to add the link yet! And uh....How do you add a the link? I kind of forgot....lol so any help would be appreated Thanks!!! Oh and I think I just did but just incase someone CHECK IT OUT ON THE BOTTOM OF THE PAGE SEE IF CHAPTER ONE OF LITTLE RIKU AND MOMO WORKS
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